The Adventure to the Farm
By Ryan
There owns was a boy named Paper. Paper was really really odd. His hair was green and so was his skin! When he went to school people always make fun of his name and skin. Then one day he got sick of people making fun of him so he got in a fight with a kid named Buck. He was much tougher than Paper. But then Buck told Paper that he looked like seaweed. So then he got so mad he couldn’t take it anymore so he went over there and punched Buck in the face. Then Buck had a bloody nose. Then Buck got up and wiped the blood from his face. He picked up Paper and threw him down on the cement. Paper’s mind went completely white. He started dreaming about running away and finding lots of animals. Then his mind went completely white again. He woke up in his room and said “what’s going on? Where am I?” He looked at the clock and it was 8:58 AM. He looked at his arm for any blood. Then he saw dry blood tearing at his skin. Then he realized what he had been through. He got soooo mad he ran as fast as he could into the forest with his bag with lots of food in it and then stopped at a tree. He said “I am probably going to stay here the rest of my life.” Then he spent the night by the tree. Once he woke up he kept walking until he saw a farm. So then he went to the farm and their was a couple animals in the farm. One was a tortoise and another one was a pig and the last one was a cow. He really liked the animals and the animals liked him to. Then he cooked himself some dinner. The farm did not have any food in it but it had a working stove, so he cooked the meat that was in his bag and then went to bed. In the morning he woke up and went to the cow to get some milk. He washed it and then put it in a cup. After that he made himself a breakfast. He tried to ride the cow but that did not work so well. Paper stayed there 2 more days, but he missed his own house so he said goodbye to the animals and headed home. Once he got home he went inside and apologized and his parents accepted the apology and then life went back to normal.
By Ryan
There owns was a boy named Paper. Paper was really really odd. His hair was green and so was his skin! When he went to school people always make fun of his name and skin. Then one day he got sick of people making fun of him so he got in a fight with a kid named Buck. He was much tougher than Paper. But then Buck told Paper that he looked like seaweed. So then he got so mad he couldn’t take it anymore so he went over there and punched Buck in the face. Then Buck had a bloody nose. Then Buck got up and wiped the blood from his face. He picked up Paper and threw him down on the cement. Paper’s mind went completely white. He started dreaming about running away and finding lots of animals. Then his mind went completely white again. He woke up in his room and said “what’s going on? Where am I?” He looked at the clock and it was 8:58 AM. He looked at his arm for any blood. Then he saw dry blood tearing at his skin. Then he realized what he had been through. He got soooo mad he ran as fast as he could into the forest with his bag with lots of food in it and then stopped at a tree. He said “I am probably going to stay here the rest of my life.” Then he spent the night by the tree. Once he woke up he kept walking until he saw a farm. So then he went to the farm and their was a couple animals in the farm. One was a tortoise and another one was a pig and the last one was a cow. He really liked the animals and the animals liked him to. Then he cooked himself some dinner. The farm did not have any food in it but it had a working stove, so he cooked the meat that was in his bag and then went to bed. In the morning he woke up and went to the cow to get some milk. He washed it and then put it in a cup. After that he made himself a breakfast. He tried to ride the cow but that did not work so well. Paper stayed there 2 more days, but he missed his own house so he said goodbye to the animals and headed home. Once he got home he went inside and apologized and his parents accepted the apology and then life went back to normal.
This story is good but maybe you can try to show, not tell. Also, where does Paper live? Maybe you can actually try to add where the story takes place. Lastly, I have to say that your story is very unique!
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