Lost and found
By Zach
It was a hot day as Bo and I climbed up on the monster ship knows as the serpent. Bo and I were sent here because we are going to visit are grandparents in Hawaii and we do not like flying in air planes. The serpent is a very nice ship Bo and I sat down on the soft benches as my uncle Charlie said hello boys here is your room key I believe you are room three, ok I said. As I slid the key into the doorknob it opened by its self it was amazing to big beds a fridge with soda in it I looked at the boat map cool There’s a hot tub and a sauna we grabbed our suites and hoped into the hot tub we and I stayed in there until we turned into human raisins. It was time for bed as Bo and I walked back to are room I looked up at the sky there were pitch black clouds there was a storm coming we got to are room and put on our PJ’s and slipped into the cozy beds after 10 minutes of talking we dozed off. BEEP BEEP BEEP I woke up quickly it was still dark but the floor was wet I grabbed the boat manual and flipped to the bell section my face crumbled in terror three bells meant sinking ship I woke up Bo and we shot out the door I steeped on something damp and squishy I looked down to see my uncle Charlie lying there motionless I quick felt his pulse nothing he was dead but there was not time to help him we grabbed THE neon orange life jackets and jumped and hoped into the life boat Bo and I banged our heads on the front of the boat and were knocked out. Swish Swish went the gentle waves i woke up to see Bo two feet from me not moving I shot over to him my head still throbbing in pain I did CPR well at least how I thought you did it and luckily he shot water from his mouth like a fountain he opened his eyes wide and stood up and as he and I looked into the Vass rainforest but before I got to into it I remembered that we were stranded on an Island with rugged cloth no shoes and not all the ground was soft sand vroom vroom we both looked up yes!! A plane we shot over to were it landed a plump man jumped out and saw us and said what are you doing here we said are plane crashed and we were the only survivors well than it’s good I found you I will take u to Australia if you like sure you would do that well yeah I cant just let you die out here on a deserted island, right then I remembered my fear of planes but right now I would have to or I would die so I said ok and we hoped into the plane and the nice man that had now told us his name “Pilippe” looked backed and said are you ready I didn’t speak but luckily Bo spoke for me and said yes vroom vroom we were of to Australia when we got there Philipe tossed us fifty cents for the phone both I then called my mom she answered I told her every thing that night she flew in it was good to be safe again
By Zach
It was a hot day as Bo and I climbed up on the monster ship knows as the serpent. Bo and I were sent here because we are going to visit are grandparents in Hawaii and we do not like flying in air planes. The serpent is a very nice ship Bo and I sat down on the soft benches as my uncle Charlie said hello boys here is your room key I believe you are room three, ok I said. As I slid the key into the doorknob it opened by its self it was amazing to big beds a fridge with soda in it I looked at the boat map cool There’s a hot tub and a sauna we grabbed our suites and hoped into the hot tub we and I stayed in there until we turned into human raisins. It was time for bed as Bo and I walked back to are room I looked up at the sky there were pitch black clouds there was a storm coming we got to are room and put on our PJ’s and slipped into the cozy beds after 10 minutes of talking we dozed off. BEEP BEEP BEEP I woke up quickly it was still dark but the floor was wet I grabbed the boat manual and flipped to the bell section my face crumbled in terror three bells meant sinking ship I woke up Bo and we shot out the door I steeped on something damp and squishy I looked down to see my uncle Charlie lying there motionless I quick felt his pulse nothing he was dead but there was not time to help him we grabbed THE neon orange life jackets and jumped and hoped into the life boat Bo and I banged our heads on the front of the boat and were knocked out. Swish Swish went the gentle waves i woke up to see Bo two feet from me not moving I shot over to him my head still throbbing in pain I did CPR well at least how I thought you did it and luckily he shot water from his mouth like a fountain he opened his eyes wide and stood up and as he and I looked into the Vass rainforest but before I got to into it I remembered that we were stranded on an Island with rugged cloth no shoes and not all the ground was soft sand vroom vroom we both looked up yes!! A plane we shot over to were it landed a plump man jumped out and saw us and said what are you doing here we said are plane crashed and we were the only survivors well than it’s good I found you I will take u to Australia if you like sure you would do that well yeah I cant just let you die out here on a deserted island, right then I remembered my fear of planes but right now I would have to or I would die so I said ok and we hoped into the plane and the nice man that had now told us his name “Pilippe” looked backed and said are you ready I didn’t speak but luckily Bo spoke for me and said yes vroom vroom we were of to Australia when we got there Philipe tossed us fifty cents for the phone both I then called my mom she answered I told her every thing that night she flew in it was good to be safe again
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