Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Robbing a Bank by Lauren

Robbing a Bank
By, Lauren

Chapter One
I ran and started to panic. I thought to myself should I really be robbing my fathers bank? Wait, yes I should to keep my family safe. Well, I really wanted to say no but I really couldn’t. So I grabbed the money and left as quickly and as quietly as I could. The next day at school I went right up to my girlfriend Jane and said, “Uh… We really need to talk after school today.”
“What happened honey? You look a little nervous.” Jane said.
“A little nervous? How about a lot!” I said.
“What happened Jason? You’re making me scared.” Jane said very seriously.
“No. Meet me at Snuffy’s after school. Okay? Then I’ll tell you.”
“Okay! But, don’t you dare make me eat any meat.”
“Why?”
“Because I am now a vegetarian!” Jane said so proudly of herself.
“Really! I am so proud of you!” Saying like I cared a lot more than I do.
“Okay see you after school.”
“Okay!” I said happily.
After school


“Okay Jason. Tell me what happened. I was thinking about it all day at school and I’m kind of exited.” Jane said.
“Don’t tell anybody this but… Uh… I was dared to rob a bank and if I didn’t I would die and you would also. I’m really sorry Jane.”
“JASON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ROBBED A BANK!!!!!?????? And don’t be sorry for me!”
“Yes but for you and me.”
“You know they will find out! The police will!” Jane said so angrily that she had veins popping out of her neck. It was really ugly at that time.
“I know lets just leave it alone as much as we can and get jobs at a hotel or something and learn Spanish. That’s why I got you this. Will you marry me Jane, Elisa, Lorence?”
Chapter Two
“I know its way too early, but I want to love you and care for you. Just please say yes. If you say yes, we can spend the rest of our lives together.” I said as I held out the most beautiful diamond ring ever.
“I’m so sorry Jason. I can’t. I can’t do it. I’m not going to run away and get married like my sister did. I just can’t.” I could tell Jane was terrified to say it. But then I broke down into tears.
“But we can get away from all the terrible things here. Like uh there’s a murderer on the loose and there’s-” Jane just totally interrupted me and said this,
“Yeah and there’s a robber on the loose also.” Jane said as she started to get her things to go.
“Wait! Just please Jane! Please! I was trying to save our lives. But if the guy just wanted to kill you I would for sure risk my life for you.” I said begging her not to go. She stayed back to say something.
“Okay fine. I do love you. And I do want to spend the rest of my life with you so, let’s just leave in a week. Okay?” She said kind of excited.
“Okay! That’s just perfect. But you don’t have to if you don’t want to.” I said hoping she’ll still say yes.
“Well, I said yes so, yes it is.”
Chapter Three
“Ahhhhhh! Jane come here!” I screamed.
“Why!” Jane asked kind of bratty. I pretty much guess she got no answer because I passed out from bleeding to death!
“Jason! Why!” All I could pretty much say was a mumble.
“I got stabbed in my leg.” I mumbled.
“Eeek!!!” Jane ran toward me. I fell asleep. I heard words and some numbers. Some were really bad words.
“1,2,3,4! Come alive!!!” I woke up.
“were you just swearing at me? Cause I heard some really bad words.”
“Um… No?” Jane said with her lying face on.
“ Nice Jane. But, thank you for saving my life.”
“No. Thank you for coming alive. Cause I love you and I know you love me.”
“well, duh I love you! That’s why I’m going to marry you.” I said very happily.

Chapter Four
We got on the plane and then-“Crap!!!!” Screamed Jane in a whisper voice.
“What?” I quietly asked.
“Shush! Be quiet! I see my parents on the plane next to us! But what if they figure out we’re going to Mexico?” Then Jane started to panic.
“It’s okay Jane their not going to figure out that we’re here. I even gave my parents a note. Here is a copy.” I said handing it out to her. This is what it said,
Dear Mom and Dad,
I’m really sorry about this but me and Jane left home. And I’ve been keeping a secret a very long time and I’m going to tell you. Dad you know how your bank got robbed? I know who did it. It was me. Please don’t tell! I was doing it to keep me, Jane, Mom, and you alive. Also Jane and I are getting married. I know you guy’s are sad but I had to leave. Bye and I love you guy’s a lot. And I always will.
Love
Jason Sungari.
I could just imagine my parent’s crying.
“Oh! And there also is this” I said.
P.S. Don’t come and find me. Please!
“No! Jason, you don’t understand do you? My parent’s are going to come and find me. MY PARENTS!!!
They’ll find out! Like with my sister!” Jane Yelled. (But in a whisper voice.)
“Well Yeah but you’re sister convinced then to let her live out there!” I said.
“ But they’ll find out you robbed a bank and got married to me.” Jane said angrily.
A flight attendant came up to us.
“Um do you guy’s have a parent with you?” She said weirdly.
“Yeah right over there! They let us have first class.” I said lying.
“Well I believe you so I’m not going to ask that couple right over there. Not.” She said very bratty.
“Wait!” I screamed
“What!” She screamed back at me.
“How old do you have to be to be on a plane alone?” I asked politely.
“Uh at least seventeen years old. Why?” The flight attendant said.
“Well because we don’t have any parents on the plane with us. But! I’m eighteen years old and Jane here is seventeen years old. So we can be here anyways.” I said so proudly.
“Oh bummer I hoped you would get kicked off the plane.” The flight attendant said.
“Okay I’m gonna tell the pilot that because you being really bratty.” I said.
“Wait! I’ll do anything if you don’t get me fired! Please!” She begged.
“Um… How bout NO!!! you were mean to me and really your job is to be nice to people on the plane so like I said. NO!!!”
Chapter Five
“O.M.G!!!! You got us the nicest hotel in Mexico!!!” Jane said.
“Well duh!!! And I also got us a sweet. And there’s a bar in the pool.” I said.
“Yeah but honey your only eighteen years old.” Jane said.
“I know but there aren’t only alcoholic drinks there. And why would I have one anyway? Come on! Let’s go see our sweet!” I said. Okay so guess what? Our hotel room is… NOT A SWEET! I can’t believe it!
“Honey?” Jane asked.
“Yeah?” I said.
“Can you ask the hotel manager about the sweet situation?” Jane asked politely.
“Okay. Fine.” I said in an angry voice.
In the hotel lobby
“um excuse me.” A girl asked at the hotel lobby.
“WHAT!!! I’m on the phone here! Would you like somebody screaming in your face while you were on the phone?” The lady at the front desk said.
“No but-”
“Yeah I kind of thought so.”
“But this is your job! You can’t be on the phone at your job!”
“Um but this is actuelly a customer on the phone and she’s asking a lot of questions here. But you guy’s can come back later.” But the lady at the front desk was pretty much saying this,
“Oh no he did not! No way! That’s so unusual!” I finally chose to speak up. So this is what I said.
“Um excuse me? I don’t really think that’s a customer on the phone and some of these customers in line have some really big problems. Including me.” I said in the back of the line. The lady hung up the phone.
“Well young man what’s your problem?” She asked bratty.
“I got a regular hotel room when I was supposesd to have a sweet.”
“and what’s your name?”
“Jason Sungari. I think it’s German.” I said. The lady looked at me with a bratty face.
“Do you think I didn’t know German freak.” She said back as she went back to looking at her computer.
“Okay that’s it! Where’s your manager?” I said really angry.
“Back there… WAIT!” She said as I was basically knocking at the door. It was way too late for her.
“Um are you the manager for the hotel I said politely.
“Yes I am.” Said the manager.
“Why did Eleanor do anything? And tell the truth!” He said kind of happy.
“Actually, yes. She called me a German freak and is also not paying attention to any customers.” I said waiting for him to say she’s fired.
“ARGH! Eleanor! I told you one more chance! Your fired!” He said meanly.
“What! But Dad!” She said. Then I got confused. That’s her Dad?
“No buts Eleanor! I said I told you one more chance and you blew it! Go home! See you at dinner.” He said angry. But then this is the part I don’t understand. The girl left while whispering in my ear. And she said this while also putting a not in my hand,
“Here’s my phone number. Call me later.” That’s what I don’t understand. That’s why I threw the note in the garbage.
“So how may I help you?” The manager asked.
“I got a regular room when I was supposed to get a sweet.” I said.
“Okay then can I have your name?” He asked.
“Okay! My name is Jason Sungari.” I answered back cheerfully.
“Oh yeah! You did have a sweet! Okay just let me get the keys and I’ll meet you at room 516. And don’t forget your luggage!”
“Okay!”
At the room…
“Click.” The key sounded like that when we unlocked the door…
Chapter Six
I looked inside. I went into the bathroom. There it was. It’s so horrible that I can’t say it. There were my parent’s. Dad had his most favorite gun in his right hand and hand cuff’s in the other. Mom was shaking her head with her hand’s crossed.
“Um… Jane?” I asked.
“Yeah honey?”
“Come here!”
“Why?”
“Just come here!”
“Okay, okay I’m coming… Wow.” Jane said as she walked in. I could tell she was surprised.
“Um Mom? Dad? Why are you here?” I asked. They didn’t answer though. They just cuffed me up and put me in the Police car.(B.T.W my dad’s also a police.)
“Guys! You didn’t answer the question! Why are you here?” I asked. But then after I said that mom started to cry.
“Well why didn’t you tell us!” She screamed in my face.
“Because! I was afraid! And if I didn’t rob a bank you guy’s, me, and Jane would be dead!” I cried.
“But you knew you would be in jail right?” Mom said.
“Yes that’s why I didn’t tell you! I didn’t want to go to jail!” WE got on the plane. Hen Dad said something I would never forget. This is what he said,
“I’m sorry. I’m also really happy about you and Jane but, Your going to have to let her go. You know I love you and I really don’t want to kill you. So please. Just please don’t make it any harder than it is.” Dad said. Well, I didn’t say anything back. I just pouted. But then my dad’s phone started ringing. His ring tone is so weird! It goes like this,
“I like big butts and I can not lie! You other brothers can’t deny! When a girl walks in with a itty bitty waste the round thing in your face you get sprung!” It’s so annoying! My dad picked up the phone.
“Officer Christopher speaking. JK! Christopher speaking. Jane? Is that you? You sound worried what happened? Yes he is here with us. Well he’s going to jail. I’m sorry. You can visit sometime. Why not? WHAT! Your parents don’t know! Oh I understand. You want to talk to Jason? Okay! See you later Jane! Bye.” Dad handed the phone to me. I just took it without saying anything.
“Hello Jane.” I said on the phone.
“Jason! I called to ask where you were! I’m so worried! And now I can’t see you any more! I hope you can visit some time!” I was crabby so this is what I said, “Yup Jane” Bye I love you and I’ll miss you!”
“Wait!” I just hung up. The plane landed so we got down the stairs. The second Dad went for my hand……..BAMMMM! I went zooming away as fast as I could. Then before you know it dad pulled out his gun. BAM BAM BAM! I got shot three times, in my back. I remember before I died dad ran up to me.
“I told you not to make it any harder I’m really sorry for shooting you.” Dad said.
My last words were this; I love you.

1 comment:

  1. T. I like the last words I love you.
    A. How did you come up with this idea?
    G. You kind of jumped all around and it was random when you said I'm a vegitairn

    From the most oz 4th grader ever!, Britta

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