Roommates
By Jack R.
One morning Pedro and I quickly started off to school. Afterwards when we were in are seats Pedro realized that he still had his straw from last week with the rapper still on it. So when a kid with suspenders on came in Pedro wildly ripped of the rapper and broke it up into pieces and shoved one bye one into his mouth and hit the kid all over the back of his head. After class the teacher found out that Pedro shot the spit balls so during detention his teacher fell asleep so everyone sneaked out of detention. Then when their were at their neighbors party their dog popped out and started jumping on me so I tried moving around ,but he kept on following me after a while the dog finally stopped. When we left as soon as we got in the apartment heard something fall so I went to the kitchen to see what all the commotion then right when I walked in their was a dog!! so I asked Pedro why their was a dog so he told me that he got him for free since the neighbor was sick of having him so I said that we’d keep him. (1:00 IN THE MORNING)Pedro what are you doing?
Ohh I was just claming down the dog, said Pedro
Why he’s not barking?
I know I’m just making sure, said Pedro
Ok, but how long have you been up doing this?
Umm well from 9:00pm to 10:00am, said Pedro.
(NEXT FRIDAY AT SCHOOL) after school he thought that maybe the teacher fell asleep and never realized that he sneaked out of class. But then the next day he realized that the teacher just faking it so all the same people and Pedro they had to have an extra hour! After I asked him why he was their for two hours he told me that he had to make up for the last detention. Hey you know the dog
Yeah, said Pedro
Well do you think we could name him, I said
Sure I got what about Dorito, said Pedro
Uumm hmm ok I guess, I said
What do you mean you guess?
Just his name is Dorito end of discussion, I said
(THE NEXT MORNING) aghh get him out of here now!!
What omg so he ripped all that, said Pedro
YEAH!!!!NOW GET HIM OUT OF HERE! , I said
No he didn’t mean to, Pedro said
Ok but if he straiten up he goes, I said
(YEARS LATER AFTER COLLAGE) Aren’t you glad we didn’t get rid of him? , Pedro said
Yah If we did I would have felt terrible that I did that, I said
Well at least that’s over, said Pedro
Yeah, I said
T. I liked how you used diolog. It really helped make the story good.
ReplyDeleteA. What made you dicide to name the dog dorito?
G. Maybe you should not jump around from time-to-time.
-Allison ( Really good story!)
T. It was funny and creative.
ReplyDeleteA. what kind of kid is pedro?
G. don't move along so fast as you write.
great story. WYATT