Thursday, May 21, 2009

"The World" by Senna

The world
By senna
Lily was done with her test first, it was like I was dumb what am I saying I am dumb I whispered to myself. As quiet as I could get
“Lily, Lily.” I said with a louder expression
“What.” she said
“I need some help with the test.”
“That would be cheating.”
“So”
“Please”
“Zach I feel like your mother no!”
Zach stared blankly off into space it was like he was paralyzed he wouldn’t blink or move an inch.
“Cheating.” Said Mr.Masterman
He held them back from there other classes for 10 minuets. Not now Mrs. Owens is going to kill us if we are late
“Lily I needed some help with the test “
“I thought you were good at math “
“Well sorry I lied I really liked you at the time Lily you are my best friend”
“Well I guess I’m not any more”
“No Lily”
“Lily” Eathens voice came form afar
“Oh hey Eathen”
“What class are you rushing to?”
“Health”
“Same”
“Oh same” said Zach
“Who are you?”
“I’m Zach Parker”
“I’m Eathen gram”
“Hello lily Zach and Eathen” lily’s teacher Mr. Owens said.
“Hi Mr. Owens” lily said
“Lily do you still like me”
“Kind of”
“Lily I’m your best friend”
“was” she put into y sentence.
After health
“Lily” I gulped
“What”
“I…..like…. you ...”
“Liar 5 minutes ago you liked a girl named May”
“Cant a boy change his mind”
“Zach you got that from superman and it goes like this cant a girl change her mind”
“So you can’t change the words around”
“Well sorry Eathen already asked me out”
“Lily don’t go out with him he is a jerk”
“Just like you” lily said.
“Ha so you admit it” he said“Lily you just meat him like a month ago”
“So we like each other”
“It’s like a bird never eating a worm”
“Maybe he is a special worm to me”
“Um you’re the worm”
“Zach!”
“Lily believe me I do like you”
“Why should I believe you?”
“Because you just should”
“Bye Zach”
“Nooooo!”
“I’m just going to science.”
“Ok”
“Hi Mr.sebek I love what you have done with your class room I love the new carpet”
Zach started to cry at the top of his lunges why lily why lily and wouldn’t stop
Ring
School was over at 2: 50 at last we were done with school free no more school tell tomorrow
“Lily. Lily, Lily” Zach yelped
Wewowewowewowewo
A car raced bye us and sprayed us with mud.
What’s wrong lily she was giving me the silent treatment.
Lily stop giving me the silent treatment tell me what’s wrong I will tell every body you’re biggest secret!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
“What is it Zach, tell me”
“Oooooooohhhhhh nothing just that you said that you hate him but you are going out with him I all ready made banners to hang on all 865 kids in the school”
You looked in my diary!!
When tell me every thing that you looked at.
“You have a huge mole on your back that’s why you wont go swimming with me.”
“And you liked me kindergarten to 6th grade”
“Well we are in 7th grade now so ha”
You have to promise you won’t tell any body
And then we pinky promised and chanted stick a needle threw your eyes if you lie then you die and then we started to laugh hahahahahhahhahah.
Ella, Ella why are you over hear.
Your mom told that you knew I that I was coming over.
“Oh she didn’t tell me she must have for got”
“Lily do you want to play soccer”
“Sure”
“Can I play too?” Zach asked
“Fine” Ella and I said together
When me and Zach were playing I felt something connect between us.
After that we went over to his house and played Xbox.
“Zach I like you”
Ella started to cry (she liked Zach way more then I did)
You’re the nicest boy friend ever I said
And now it’s a happy ending for all of us



The end


1 comment:

  1. T. I love when you did "I thought you were my bff" "was"
    A.How did you come up with this story?
    G. I would put something else than people just talking.

    GOOD JOD SINO! From the most oz 4th grader ever!, Britta :)

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