HERO
By: ZEESHAN
Chapter 1
THE SOCCER GAME
It was a hot day. The sun was beating on my back. But then I remembered how much I hated it. One of my team member said “pass the ball or strike it.” I kicked it so hard that I almost slipped. Then the ball went over the goal and out of bounds. The coach called me.
“Nick what is the problem and why did you do that?” he asked.
“The problem is that my dad wants me to do this sport” I said.
“Then why don’t you tell him that you do not want to do this sport” he said.
“Because then my dad might get mad” I said.
15 minutes later he went to the field and try kick some goals. A moment later my dad and mom came. They went to the ice cream shop.
Chapter 2
ROOM
“Hey dad do you think I can go to my friends house?” nick said.
“Yes you can go but you have to come back at 8:00pm o.k.” my dad.
“Awesome hey dad forgot to tell you and mom you guys are the best.” I said
“Supper is ready.” My mom said loudly.
“Yes I am so hunger.” I said
At supper there was rice, meatloaf, and more. When I was done my dad asked me.
“What did you do at school today?”
“The always nothing new or cool can I go to bed now.” Nick said
“Yes you can and goodnight.” They said
When I was about to sleep I saw a tiny piece of cable hanging from the top of the sealing I sat up I could not reach it so I took a stool and pulled on the rope and the a ladder I slowly mounted the ladder and scar
Thinking what would be in there. I looked around and found a box with a lock on the box it said DO NOT OPEN! There was dust all over the box I showed the box to them. “Where did you find that container honey?” She said looking frightened
“I found it in the dark and creepy room upstairs.” I said she took the small package.
Chapter 3
box
“Honey I will tell you what we is in the box tomorrow, you should get a good night sleep because we are going to visit your aunt and uncle tomorrow.” She said. “Wake up nick wake up nick wake up nick.” My dad said. I woke up on the right side of my bed looking tried, I went down to the living room when I was about to leave I found the box from yesterday. When I was about to reach for it, “NICK” my mom said “you have to get ready we are about to leave, here you can give me that box so I can put in a safe place.” she said.
Moments later everyone was ready, the sun was way up high so we knew the car would be boiling, so when we went inside the car my dad opened ac and windows moments later we reached my aunt and uncle house.
“Hi kids” my uncle said.
“Hi uncle Joe” I said.
“How are you feeling” he said.
“Good” I said.
“How are you feeling” I said.
“Good” he said.
“All right who is up for some hot dogs?” he said.
“We are” we said loudly.
Time passed by we went back home when we reached home I found the box again, this time I took the box to my room then I went downstairs brought a hammer took it and opened the box. There was newspapers and Photos one of them had two people one was boy and one was girl and they were superhorse, I knew that because it said so I took the box to them. “Hey dad look what I found.” I said they were shocked to see what they saw. Moments later they told me that they are not his real parents and that his real died a long time ago. Your parents were superheroes and you all so have power you’re is flying and super strength. We went down to a bookcase in the basement my dad pulled on five books to open the secret door way that was the hide out.
Chapter 4
Killer
17 years later I work as a news reporter my superhero name is eagle. But one day I heard someone talk about someone killing two superhero when I went to work I went to the superhero web and saw what day they died then I went to their profile and saw all of bad guy and what their names are I went to each guy asking him did you kill my parents seven day past there was one leaf for the last one I asked him did you kill two superhero? He said yes why did you kill my parents I killed them because they let my dad die so I killed your parents your dad was hard to kill him but I did it your mom was easy to kill you will die now I said and leaf him at the shop.
Wednesday, May 26, 2010
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T= i liked that you said where you are and your chapters too!
ReplyDeleteA= what made you write this book? do you have background knowlege of this?
G= i think it was an amazing book but mybe what you could do next time is mybe do a little more showing and not telling but i think it was amazing though!
T. I liked how I was always excited to know whats going to happen next.
ReplyDeleteA.why does I am so hunger mean?
G. you should tell why he doesnt like soccer?