Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Wild vs. Hawkeyes by Jack

Zack’s parents are divorced his mom lives in Colorado. His dad lives in Chicago. He lives with his dad. His dad owns a corvette. His dads name is Dan.

“Ok son lets go play some hockey” as Dan was grabbing a red Poweraid. Zack grabbed the heavy hockey bag running out the door. “What car should we take the corvette or the Lamborghini?” Zack and his dad chose the Lamborghini. Dan started the car “off we go Dan said turning up radio”

Are we there yet Zack asked?

Not yet about one more minute Dan said.

Now we are here Dan said.

“SWEET!” Zack said

They got of the car and Zacks friend crowed around the car Zacks friend Aaron said “I thought you don’t drive the car you only rub it with a dipper” he said

Well this car is old but I still drive it but I still drive it.

Zacks other friend named Kyle asked what did you with that Honda.

Oh, that Honda well see me and Zack’s mom divorced so I gave her the Honda from the junk yard. “Ok Zack are you ready for the big game” Dan said.

Yep Zack said, he walk in “WOW” it is so loud in here he said.

“Zack we’re in here” Aaron said

Zack walk and said “it is hog wild in here”

Zack sat next to Justin.

Coach crybaby walk and said hurry boys were on the ice at 5:30 the time right now is 5:15. Now the time was 5:30.


The puck dropped it was end to end action the hawk eyes scored to make it 1-0 then the wild scored to make it 1-1 there goes the buzzer. Now it was the second period know one scored. Now it was the third period know one scored.

Coach crybaby said “we are going to overtime”
The puck dropped for overtime Zack got the puck he went to the net he shot and he scored.

The wild win the game.



THE END






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2 comments:

  1. t I liked that it was about hockey

    a Do you like to play hockey?

    g Keep up the good work!!

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  2. t love your story

    a do you like playing hockey

    g you should make it 2 OT

    Mrs.Grage

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